Tuesday, November 10, 2009

'Prose ya Poetry'

Kuch din pehle bola ek dost"
Arre Berns ab tum kavita ko rakho kinare
Aur likh do prose...Short story you see
Will be a good change...
Maybe help you brainstorm
And see what else you can achieve!"


Hum bhi chad gaye encouragement ke pahaad pe
Socha ab bus likh hi dalthi hoon
Ek "originaal" kahani ekdum dil se
Kora kagaaz,bhari hui kalam,shabdo se bhara sir
Par character hi na mile, na hi koi 'inspiration'
Har line ke baad koi 'filum' yaad aye
Aur apke sincerely 'suroor'ke dialogue(nightmares)raat ko jagaye!


Bahut socha, bahut samjha,bahut dimaag lagaya
Par kahani na nikal ke ayi
Hud ho gayi sarkar is prose ne tho bada rulaya!
Tho dost mere, prose ko kara humne side
Aap na dukhi ho tho likh diye ye kuch line
Koshish humari zaari rahegi, aap chinta na kare
After all who can reject an offer so "bona fide"


This is for a friend who has been after me to write prose/ short story for quite a while now...this is me saying sorry and don't give up! :)
Sorry Dost! Tried but nahi hua..so just to make up for the broken promise...me putting a poem dedicated to your "prose love and enthu" on ME Blog!! What an honour!
(Okies...modesty module to be remembered)

On a serious note..Thanku for the encouragement and push to try out new things :)
I Thank and Praise God for "kala appreciative friends" like you!!

1 comment:

Jakes said...

Hmm.. To aapne short story attempt kiya :) .. Chalo accha hai.. Begun is quarter done.. ya maybe 10% done.. Accha chalo.. quarter done..Encouragement n all that...

N character ka kya prob hai dost.. Story climax mein to character ko maarna hi hai :)

For the record.. First!!